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So let's do a thing.
Let's critique each other's oc!
Let's start out with "what is a "critique"? For the sake of this, a critique is pointing out what's bad, why it's bad and most importantly what can be done to improve/fix it
It's NOT pointing out flaws and laughing or just being mean. The point of this improvement. You may critique anything about the oc, from the back story to the art they use.
Post your oc if you would like to be critiqued
otherwise, we will start off with demonic.
In Album: Demonic H Hooves's Timeline Photos
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Gnarly Streaks
eeeeeuuuuuuuooooooooooooo~
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January 7, 2020
Bok
Okay, I have something real.
The one thing I would "change" about Demonic's design would be his eye color. With all of that red and black I wouldn't have gone with plain grey for the eyes, I'd have picked a color that 'pops' against the very red tone of his coat, you have some golden in his cutie ... View More
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January 7, 2020
Lula Vieve
I have to agree. The bright red just pops so much that the grey drowns in the design.
From a drawing standpoint I always forget to draw his booties, and arm bracelets(?). I feel like they're very easy to forget, and are just there to try and give him a little something . (SO they're easily forgett... View More
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January 7, 2020
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Polo Fastter
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January 7, 2020
Lula Vieve
Imagine posting memes that don't even make sense/add anything to the conversation.
Can't relate.
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January 7, 2020
Polo Fastter
he wearing a fish costume. he a Pegasus.
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January 7, 2020
Bright Brave
Its too late.
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January 7, 2020