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Sooo... I'm ready to show this now. Something I've been working on for the past few afternoons, it's of an alternate character of mine that I haven't mentioned or posted anything about before, Neon Riot. The picture isn't quite finished yet, gotta add details, but any feedback would be greatly appreciated as I'm really trying to improve my art. ^^ Be as harsh as you see fit, I'd rather have the honest truth than sugarcoat it and not improve. xD
In Album: Angel's Timeline Photos
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Icy Creation
Really the only thing off is the eyes, and honestly that might just be the lack of color making them look too uniform. Otherwise this looks great.
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February 11, 2022
Angel
Thanks so much! By too uniform do you mean like blending in with the rest of the character? And yeah, I haven't added colour/shading or whatever to anything yet as I'm saving that for the detail phase, specifically the eyes because they'll require a lot of work for what I want.
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February 11, 2022
Icy Creation
Nein, not like blending in with the rest of the character. More that the the eye rings of the eye closer to perspective- the iris, pupil, and whites (assuming normal biology)- are too uniform. A bit like cocentric rings. But like I said, it's also likely a problem of it being uncolored and messing w... View More
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February 11, 2022
Angel
Ooooh okay, yeah I get what you mean. Yeah we'll see what it looks like after colour then.
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February 11, 2022