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Princess Bluemoon
Since this is straight FoE, I was wondering since more people pay attention here, I'd like to know if anyone would tell me honestly how they feel about this scene, I needed to know if it could be bett... View More
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Glacia/sarah/leona
Thats great! I like it
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February 1, 2018
Marzipan
I feel like you shifted too quickly from the dream to reality. Maybe say a little more about how the character feels about the dream, and then gradually shift to talking about their day so the reader doesn't feel confused. And maybe elaborate more on the dream. What's going on besides you feeling pa... View More
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March 29, 2018
Princess Bluemoon
I am no longer doing this fic, this is just a book club please talk about other FoE topics.
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March 29, 2018
