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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
That night, and then the day after, and the day after that day… It had all been a blur. He must have exchanged at most 4 words with Carmine ever since. The dinner and the flower bouquet that had been ... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
Was Carmine there? Well, there was only one way to find out. The knocks on the doors did prompt a stir on the other side, but that very well could’ve been Carmine’s cats. “What?” Or the detective himself. No, Carmine had purposefully remained invisible ever since that god awful night. It brought ... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
Just about what Gray expected to see, minus the deep dark circles under Carmine’s eyes. In contrast, the actor smelled fresh and was well dressed, albeit in casual comfortable clothing. A black turtleneck sweater and light-blue jeans. He did a quick scan of Carmine’s body, taking note that he hadn’t... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
He held mostly together until he saw the look on Gray’s face. His lower lip trembled, but he held the dam by his damned fingernails. He only let out a low, choked sob when Gray pulled him in. Then silence. Back in Carmine’s room were the ever lazy cats: Chicken and Waffles, apparently still laid o... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
Gray briefly locked eyes with Carmine’s cats over the bed as he stared from Carmine’s shoulder. Those little beasts had been living together with them for as long as Carmine had moved in. But still Gray often forgot they even had cats, maybe because they were only ever present whenever Carmine himse... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
With officer Pluto out of the way, Gray turned his entire attention towards Carmine, eagerly waiting for him to do his thing. However, he did not stop moving either. Without knowing, he directed their path towards the seats where he was sure the ‘audience’ from that night should have been sitting. ... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
If Gray’s memory serves him right, he’d remember that the trash effigies of the attacker’s friends had front row seats to the madness. There were about twenty seats in total, which left sixteen unoccupied. The setup was similar to a school play. Little gaps between rows so others could scoot on by.... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
An added layer of difficulty came from the fact that the building had a completely different aesthetic during the day. Gray had not wanted to even peek back into his memories… but if it served to buy Berry’s safety, then he had to at least try. It all started with one deep breath and a fearful glanc... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
A total recount of what happened did a phenomenal job in rediscovering old clues, even if there were some details that would have to be fact checked. Carmine could sense his friend’s hesitation, and his fear. He, himself, could only remember the faintest ghost of an answer… like looking at a bird fl... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
“Oh yeah! Good idea…! Let me just stay here sitting outside while you go into a lair full of hitmen…Are you kidding!?” Gray snapped. “If you’re so adamant in getting yourself shot then I’m going too!” Words of bravery, but he was clearly terrified. Going into a shark’s secret business, just the two... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
Regardless of what Gray actually wanted to do, Carmine had already made his decision. As far as he knew, his cousin’s attacker could be sitting right in that building belonging to Bull and Mako. Was he enjoying lunch with the company around him? What does this freak even eat? Then, began to think ... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
“Carmine, wait!” Gray scrambled behind him like a duckling following is mom. Only, well, he wasn’t ready to jump out just then, he had to undo his belt and that added a few seconds to his run. He was stumbling only a few feet behind the detective, though. The only things Gray knew about mafias and ... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
As far as Carmine was concerned, Gray wasn’t even there. It was just the two of them and a choking guard with a potentially kinked windpipe. He tried pushing through the door, but the damn thing was immovable. Either there was a lock really doing its job, or the coward blocked it with a chair or a... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
Who could it be? Who could it be? Well, Gray could rest easy enough, as the voice on the phone was not one from the hospital, but a familiar voice he became reacquainted with this afternoon. Officer Pluto!... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
The few seconds that it took to obtain a reply were the longest ones Gray had yet experienced—if we don’t count the missed kiss, those were even longer. As soon as that voice called back from the other end of the line, Gray released a silent sigh of relief that said everything. He knew Carmine woul... View More
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Carmen Gumshoe
Well, that interruption did warrant a “somebody better be dead,” moment, but given Berry’s condition it wasn’t a good idea to say it even in jest. “Four’s dead?” It was a surprise… but not a sad one. That did beg the question: why would Four have gotten pinched the same day Berry was attacked? Ins... View More
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Gray Rivers Alto Yuri
As Carmine hung the phone, Gray remained silent. His eyes were lost somewhere in the ceiling, and he was scratching his chin. “…Isn’t it convenient though? That 4 got killed the same night Berry was attacked?” “Carmine, do you trust the police…?” was perhaps a weird question, but if Gray was an exp... View More
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